"The hour of departure has arrived, and we go our ways - I to die, and you to live. Which is better God only knows."~Socrates
That looks really cool! and nice words. =)
Even though I don't play basketball that was really good.
I really liked the feel of this poem, it was serious but not too much, good job!
Wow. That brings back so many memories of getting hit by bigger kids. Haha. Good poem.
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Ryan,This poem was really good. I liked your use of repetition.
I agree with Elli, your use of repetition was really good. And your first sentence made you want to read more. Great job :)
that was awesome. nice vocabulary
I agree with Derek - even though I'm clueless on the basketball front, great poem :)
I agree with what everyone else said-You used really good vocabulary and repetition!
That looks really cool! and nice words. =)
ReplyDeleteEven though I don't play basketball that was really good.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the feel of this poem, it was serious but not too much, good job!
ReplyDeleteWow. That brings back so many memories of getting hit by bigger kids. Haha. Good poem.
ReplyDeletehahaha. slinger cough cough.
ReplyDeleteRyan,
ReplyDeleteThis poem was really good. I liked your use of repetition.
I agree with Elli, your use of repetition was really good. And your first sentence made you want to read more. Great job :)
ReplyDeletethat was awesome. nice vocabulary
ReplyDeleteI agree with Derek - even though I'm clueless on the basketball front, great poem :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with what everyone else said-You used really good vocabulary and repetition!
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